Saturday, September 7, 2013

PITBULL



In Hollywood Producers will ask for a TREATMENT rather than a full screenplay. A treatment can be somewhere between a synopsis and a short story with mostly visual action with almost no dialogue or screen direction.
Here is a treatment for an allegorical, science fiction, horror, thriller in a Stephen King vein.
Let’s call it, PITBULL…
Film opens with a TV commercial for PITBULL PUPPY FOOD… an old wise 35 year veteran VETERINARIAN, as in animal Doctor, in a white lab coat, caresses a beautiful cute pitbull puppy and explains how he has combined all the best ORGANIC ingredients, Vitamins, and just a 1% secret ingredient developed by animal loving scientists to make your pitbull puppy grow to be one of the strongest, healthiest, smartest dogs that ever existed AND… We purposely have found a way to make our specialized dog food the most inexpensive on the market because..well… we just love dogs.
Then we pull out from the TV to a typical household with a pitbull puppy and a man playing with his new dog has a look in his eye like, sounds good to me. I’ll put it on my grocery list.
Then we see we are in a big city as another man, a Ghetto looking black man and white man enter a grocery store and find the dog food.
We follow this line to another couple who own a pitbull, and the dog owner is a JERK and hits the puppy very hard for peeing on the rug.
We close in on the cowering puppy whose eyes almost seem to be logging this moment in his mind.
We follow up with two men in a coffee shop who look like stock investors reading the news about stocks. One says, this new dog food company has gone public and it looks like it is really taking off.
ONE YEAR LATER
We see a busy back street and a crowd of shady ghetto types hustling money…
We then see it is a PITBULL FIGHT…
The TWO DOGS are growling but almost not at one another… They seem to actually be PISSED at the crowd and not one another…
When they are RELEASED from their leashes to FIGHT they instead turn on the crowd VICIOUSLY, as everyone runs screaming, the dogs rip open cage doors with their huge jaws and release the other dogs… CARNAGE ensues as the people run for their lives…
All across the city PITBULLS in the windows seem to know what is going on and bark in unison… when their owners try to quiet them… CARNAGE ensues…
PITBULLS break doors and windows and escape…
We see a MONTAGE of a war between authorites, animal control and PITBULLS in every city in America…snipers taken out by packs of pitbulls and the guns dragged off…
We see a dog whisperer type get torn to shreds… We hear an expert on TV who says, “I don’t know how to say this but we believe the dogs have reached an intelligence of a level equal to humans and are working in a conspiratorial coordinated effort to take over the cities… The TV Expert is then jumped by a pitbull in the studio as stunned camera men lock their cameras on and run…
THEN we see the city boarded up and people peering out of cracks as the dogs patrol the street…
THEN we see am emergency report… A man surrounded by growling pitbulls… THE Veteranarian from the original commercial reads a statement…
“I am sorry and I don’t know how to say this but they are communicating with me telepathically… They know they are in control now and their law is this… They will only attack and eat 1% of the population for food but the people they eat will either be people they find to be of little use to society or those attempting to conspire against them…
ANOTHER Year passes, people have long returned to work…but the PITBULLS are policing roads, buses, trains, work places, grocery stores, shopping malls… everyone scared for their lives cooperate but accept the dogs as a fact of life now…
WE see dogs drag GUNS to a pile, GUNS confiscated and BLOODY…
We then start to witness INDIVIDUALS and small rebellions as some people try to win back control… On board a helicopter the pilot and co pilot whose passenger includes a pitbull are doing a traffic report… The glimpses at one another indicate they are up to something, and suddenly the Helicopter veers in a sharp sideways turn and the Pitbull is ejected out a door and splatters in the street in stopped traffic…
We then see the helicopter hover over the stash of guns and lower a large magnet and pick up some guns… the pitbulls viciously bark and sound an alarm… we then see the men shooting pit bulls from the helicopter and then land on a ship in Lake Michigan…
Pitbulls are actually swimming toward the ship and a group of men and women on board use assorted weapons to kill the dogs…
One man says the resistance is getting traction world wide as the dogs have some limitations physically…
BUT THEN…
We see the PITBULLS converge on an ANIMAL RIGHTS facility… Animal rights activists are then seen going to Newspapers, radio and TV to begin a propaganda campaign…
ALL CREATURES deserve to live and the PITBULLS have done more good than bad by far… the economy is strong, welfare has ended, only the fit survive, the dogs only eat 1% and do not have a need for greed or excess… the world is in actual better shape because of them and the real enemy is the RESISTANCE…
SOON…
The resistance is being sold out and betrayed and taken down as the divide and conquer propaganda campaign works and people sell them out for self preservation or because of a delusional emotionalism that believes the propaganda…
THE END
Do I need to explain the moral and underlying theme of fascism, Nazism, The Talmudic fanatacism, the TSA, the war on terror, the viciousness of humanity upon one another?

4 comments:

  1. Note to Hollywood...

    Bidding War on this story to begin Monday morning...

    By lunch every studio will want it and I can be contacted at

    TVKalmes@gmail.com
    shatteredelbow@yahoo.com
    www.openmindedjuror.blogspot.com

    and if all that fails look me up on youtube screen name tvkalmes

    I'm serious...lol...

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  2. The liberalism of emotionalism that chooses DOG slavery because they don't want to hurt a living creature...

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    1. and yet the extreme discipline of the dogs whose rules are clear cut and consistent makes for a world that some choose to live in as better, while others who tried to resist are conquered and desposed of...

      One would think that as a human, accepting being ruled by dogs would be completely unacceptable... but yet under their rule, all of the chaos and mayhem disappears,

      aside from the 1% of the population per city that are taken down in the streets in feeding frenzies... the other 99% goes about a crime free world, and the economies flourish based on strict discipline..

      scenes can include dogs growling down someone who litters and soon there is no litter...

      Or a drug dealer who is chased and torn to shreds, or a fat man waddling out of a fast food restaurant eaten by a pack of dogs and soon everyone is exercising...

      Say the dogs target someone for food who gets away, so they don't stalk that person, rather find another meal... so there is a certain sporting chance of escape... especially based on people in better health and the weak being taken down... the dogs even seem to let the young survive if they behave but perhaps there is a child who misbehaves often enough that when sent down to the principles office a pitbull appears from behind the desk...lol...

      It could have a sardonic ironic humor to the social implications of being policed by such simplistic but strict rules.... the dogs intellect puts an end to unjust cruelty such as pitbull fights or many hunts for sport...

      Possibly the dogs know talent and pass the talented street musician and single out the bad musician for silencing... it could be funny in its cold judgemental finality... lol...

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    2. and of course they eat wallstreet bankers and end trading alltogether... :)

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